K6BD 1 End

March 19, 2019 by Sierra Rush

Well that is it for issue 1. It was interesting.

We don’t have any idea who our main character is. All we know was that she was nervous having sex with her boyfriend, probably for the first time. But that doesn’t tell us who she is and what she is like as a person. Hell, I don’t think we even have her own name yet.

The demons (or aliens…that is still up for debate) going after her with that mind key thing, yeah she is chosen for something. No idea what, but she was chosen for something.

And all of the author notes psalm readings and religious text. I do like the atmosphere that they bring here, it gives a little world building before we actually get to the world. Like, is it a religion in the canon, is it just flavor text, will she even meet these people in real life? It is unsure, but it does pose the world in a larger scale.

And then we have the alien plane itself. Love the designs of all of the creatures and people there. Love Robocop, side of justice, going on his raid and trying to do his job. I am sure he is going to be the introduction of our protagonist to the world, since he knows what that light on her forehead is.

Most of this chapter was mainly world building instead of character focus, but I think that is fine. The art is gorgeous, the world is interesting, and the questions it set up are engaging to find the answers to. On my Fibonacci scale of 1-21, I would give this a 13. A good start, and I wouldn’t mind continuing it.

March 19, 2019 by Sierra Rush

I swear YISUN really is reverse-Buddha. because Bone Garden??

I guess the “ways” are the whatever paths/rules that they follow….not an actual chart on like smiling, smirking, tight lip, etc

Plus I would rather be cunning than Wise. Because if I was put down, I would be tricked instead of being revealed as foolish.

And the answer is…”Yes, yes you may. And you already did. So I win.”

I want to be able to write a story like it comes out of a religious book.

I have seen that Buck in Princess Mononoke

I love how he is very polite to someone that killed millions of his kids (they were all dicks I guess) and his secret name is the world’s only known secret.

The tree doesn’t like being hit in anger I guess. I’m thinking the secret name is like…life, or a heart beat or something. Because how the hell do you pronounce a heart beat

IT WAS A LITTLE SPANISH FLEA

Does everyone have like fire powers? Is that what the “white children” mean? That they burn so hot they are white?

And the moral of the story is “don’t insult the queen”

Well, that was a certainly religious story type ending. While I wan’t expecting something long like this, it was very well thought out and entertaining to read.