K6BD 1 End

Well that is it for issue 1. It was interesting.

We don’t have any idea who our main character is. All we know was that she was nervous having sex with her boyfriend, probably for the first time. But that doesn’t tell us who she is and what she is like as a person. Hell, I don’t think we even have her own name yet.

The demons (or aliens…that is still up for debate) going after her with that mind key thing, yeah she is chosen for something. No idea what, but she was chosen for something.

And all of the author notes psalm readings and religious text. I do like the atmosphere that they bring here, it gives a little world building before we actually get to the world. Like, is it a religion in the canon, is it just flavor text, will she even meet these people in real life? It is unsure, but it does pose the world in a larger scale.

And then we have the alien plane itself. Love the designs of all of the creatures and people there. Love Robocop, side of justice, going on his raid and trying to do his job. I am sure he is going to be the introduction of our protagonist to the world, since he knows what that light on her forehead is.

Most of this chapter was mainly world building instead of character focus, but I think that is fine. The art is gorgeous, the world is interesting, and the questions it set up are engaging to find the answers to. On my Fibonacci scale of 1-21, I would give this a 13. A good start, and I wouldn’t mind continuing it.

I swear YISUN really is reverse-Buddha. because Bone Garden??

I guess the “ways” are the whatever paths/rules that they follow….not an actual chart on like smiling, smirking, tight lip, etc

Plus I would rather be cunning than Wise. Because if I was put down, I would be tricked instead of being revealed as foolish.

And the answer is…”Yes, yes you may. And you already did. So I win.”

I want to be able to write a story like it comes out of a religious book.

I have seen that Buck in Princess Mononoke

I love how he is very polite to someone that killed millions of his kids (they were all dicks I guess) and his secret name is the world’s only known secret.

The tree doesn’t like being hit in anger I guess. I’m thinking the secret name is like…life, or a heart beat or something. Because how the hell do you pronounce a heart beat

IT WAS A LITTLE SPANISH FLEA

Does everyone have like fire powers? Is that what the “white children” mean? That they burn so hot they are white?

And the moral of the story is “don’t insult the queen”

Well, that was a certainly religious story type ending. While I wan’t expecting something long like this, it was very well thought out and entertaining to read.

He literally body-slammed you from 10 feat away, that is cool.

Martial arts alien cyborg robocop. I can dig it.

A violent paladin that worships a pacifist god, I can dig it.

And he was saved by the confused as fuck human.

….is that a hint that she is trans? Or that he is gay? I can’t really tell, but will use “he/him” from now on until I get conformation.

So this is a cop and a gang lord. And what comes next is a Human falling into the room.

So is she a cop? Alien Robo-Cop?

Oh hey look, translations for the aliens. And its about a prostitution opium den, fun.

ok, that is your fault. If you are going to run, at least turn around and run forward. But look, we have a kenku here.

You might want to run before they decide to sell you to a slaver or something

Wow, the designs are beautiful

Welcome to your nightmare Alice

I had to make sure that this was a read song. And good news, it is.

At least you are alright…mostly. But does your forehead…shut?

Well, there is the rest of her body.

We continue on and there is a Brian now

Exiles will always inhabit desert planets. It happened in Homestuck so why not here.

So is Alien Demon King knew that The dinosaur YE meme is gunning for the throne?

And know we have a boyband name. Who hires these people?

cool, neat, but hell is also fire and brimstone and the devil, so people stabbing you isn’t really an illusion there is it

God, HOW many Servants are going to speak here??

…what the hell is a bird gesture? Did he flip them off?

And I guess this comes from the teachings of Demon-Buddha. Will we ever meet them??

ok her skeleton is here. Are her other body parts somewhere else?

ok, alien market. Are they aliens and NOT demons?