Monster Pulse 1 End

So this was an interesting first chapter. We get a general idea of who Bina is, not a lot of details, but enough to push the plot forward. She has no idea who this heart monster is, but it really did take her heart to sustain itself.

The secret evil pta MIB is horrible. But we got enough hints over what they do without taking away from Bina, since this is the story of her escape. I love the creativity of the forms these monsters take, and I guess the spirit things comes from the pta MIB, or at least they have some control of it.

I am glad Julie was there. She was pretty cool, if a little nuts. But they did well in making Julie and Bina act like regular children.

Heart-Mon is cute. I love her (him? them? I’ll go with her for now). She is a big doofas, but innocent and very kind. She also kicks ass so that is a plus. 

This was a good chapter for intoducing our main character and the idea of body monsters. However, this series is also at least 30 chapters long. So unless I get some….incentive…..to continue with this series, it will probably be a while before I continue with it. But one I wouldn’t mind.

On a Fibonacci scale of 1 to 21, I would give this chapter a 13. Not a “die hard omg I want more” feel, but it is still a “I am intrigued and it was written very well so I would like to read more”

Don’t worry, he can just….listen with your heart

This is so peaceful. I love it.

yes child. Day will be better. for now just rest.

Yes, a heart is a comforting thing. No matter how you are feeling, as long as it beats, it will always get better

Bina has been put through a lot. No kid should feel like this

Leave her alone, she just wants to reach the stars

At least she is open to organ genders

Time to eat a tree

There we go. now you are thinking on the right track

I like how she thinks that her heart just suddenly decided to become alive

AW, this much be the first time he saw the night sky

Your 13. Dedication is only going to go so far

Human naming convention. How we got such names as Chai Tea, Sahara Desert, and Kangaroo

At least he tries

I would not say “do exactly as I say” in case they are too literal, but at least she still wants him to be safe

walking along with your monster date

And then there were two

Julie did save Bina, so they are both good little beans

God how long was Julie in there for her to outgrow a dress?